I was getting more nervous, and was starting to think that maybe all this was just a bad idea when I heard Kristen arrive in the parlor where I was standing still.'Hey honey, look what I got here!' she said to me.Kristen was holding Dave hand in hand. That usually results in angry readers and low. I’ve started warning readers beforehand when a story ends abruptly without the expected explicit sex scene. I only hope you don’t hate it.A word of warning: despite the strong sexual content of this story and nudity throughout, nothing directly sexual happens between father and daughter. I’m not good enough to write a perfectly constructed story.
Visualizing as you write, you often see things differently than your readers.
